2015商務(wù)英語BEC高級寫作范文（精選）
【參考范文】
Report writing Ex 4: Sample answer: (235words)
Reassessment of job satisfaction: SuePearson(PR Dept.)
Introduction
This report sets out to use Workset colours toassess the accuracy of my job description as PRofficer and to suggest a number of changes.
Findings
It is clear that there is a difference between theway the company views the job and the reality as I perceive it. Firstly, a number of areas whichdemand a significant proportion of my time are not mentioned in the official job brief. Thesegment on the pie chart which provides most cause for concern is the pink sector; this relatesto my attendance at a number of meetings which I can contribute little. Another significantarea is the grey segment; this refers to the unscheduled time I spend sorting out computerproblems. I feel these activities are hampering my core work. As can be seen from the piecharts, the time I spend actively working to meet the goals agreed with my line manager is lessthan envisaged.
Conclusions
The above discrepancies clearly indicate that my current job brief is inaccurate.
Recommendations
I would recommend that my official job brief should be updated using the Workset colours.It would also be valuable to consider the proportion of non-core colours in the pie chart andto investigate whether work in these areas could be carried out by someone else more suitedto these tasks.
【參考譯文】
報告寫作前4:樣品回答:(235字)
工作滿意度的評估:SuePearson(公關(guān)部門。)
介紹
這份報告提出了使用Workset顏色評估我的工作描述的準(zhǔn)確性程度PRofficer和建議的變化。
發(fā)現(xiàn)
很明顯,一定是有區(qū)別的,該公司認(rèn)為工作和現(xiàn)實是我感知它。首先,許多領(lǐng)域whichdemand很大一部分的時間并沒有提及的正式工作。Thesegment在餅圖提供行業(yè)最引起關(guān)注的是粉紅色;這relatesto我出席的會議我可以貢獻(xiàn)小。另一個significantarea是灰色的部分,這是指計劃外的時間我花computerproblems排序。我覺得這些活動是阻礙我的核心工作。從piechart可以看到,我花的時間積極努力達(dá)成目標(biāo),和我的部門經(jīng)理是小于設(shè)想。
結(jié)論
上述差異明顯表明,短暫的我現(xiàn)在的工作是不準(zhǔn)確的。
建議
我建議我的正式工作短暫使用Workset顏色應(yīng)該更新。這也將是有價值的考慮非核心顏色的比例餅圖和調(diào)查工作是否在這些領(lǐng)域可以由別人更suitedto這些任務(wù)。
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