2016年4月9日托福考試寫作回顧

綜合寫作：

3  approaches to improve and extend the natural reserves for tortoise.

獨立寫作：

Do you  agree or disagree with the following statement? Getting advice from friends  who are older than you is more valuable than getting advice from friends your  same age.

朗閣講師羅婧依點評

綜合寫作：

閱讀：

1.    Establish the natural reserves through planting trees. 通過種樹建立自然保護區(qū)。

2.    Raise the tortoises in the natural reserves  for some period and then take them to emigrate to the wild. 在保護區(qū)養(yǎng)一些龜，然后將它們他們遷移到野外。

3.    Choose some tortoises living with the more  ones in the wild to move to the sites where are no tortoises but pleasant for  survival. 在野外龜多的地方，選一些龜移到那些沒有龜?shù)�是環(huán)境適宜的地方。

聽力反駁：

1.    It prevents the sunshine and the grass growing healthily to plant trees. As  a result, the tortoises living there have no food chain resources. 種樹遮擋陽光, 不利于草的生長。龜就沒有吃的。

2.    The reserves have systematic techniques and approach to cure the disease  from tortoises, but it is opposite in the wild. 在保護區(qū)有治療龜疾病的技術(shù)和方法，而野外則沒有。

3.    The tortoises come home because of homesick and they perhaps die on the  way emigration. 龜因為想家，會回去，而且在遷徙的路上，也有可能死亡。

獨立寫作：

難度較易，只要任選其一說出理由即可，思路剖析如下：

（在這里陳述正方觀點）

1.    The friends who are  older than you can teach you many principles and rules because the majority  of them have received more education than you.年長的人可以教你很多道理，因為他們中的大多數(shù)都受的教育比你多。所以他們會有更多專業(yè)的知識（professional knowledge）來幫你分析解決問題；然而你的同齡人的知識面可能跟你差不多，因此有些問題無法解決。比如如果你想買車，你的同齡人更多的可能會從外觀（appearance）來給你建議，而比你年長的人很可能從性能（function）材料（material）發(fā)動機（engine）等方面給你更專業(yè)的建議；

2.    The friends who are older than you can strike your  chord deeply in mind because they have more similar experiences like you who  want to find a solution when you are in the confusion or dillema.比你年長的人在你迷茫困惑，特別想要找到出路時，總能引發(fā)你的共鳴。舉例子可舉選擇大學(xué)、選擇專業(yè)

3.    The friends who  are older than you can help you grow mature because they have learnt how to  face impulsion in your age. 年長的朋友可以幫助你成熟起來，因為他們已經(jīng)學(xué)會了如何在你這個年紀(jì)面對沖動的心態(tài)。比如課上因為誤會被老師批評（being criticized  by teacher because of some misunderstanding），如果是同齡的朋友，很可能跟你一起來咒罵（curse）老師或做出其他沖動的事（impulsively），但是年齡更長一些的人可能會幫你分析老師的想法，然后幫你建立正確的態(tài)度（establish correct  attitude and value）

考試預(yù)測

1.  綜合寫作和獨立寫作可以重點看下2012~2014年的機經(jīng)

2.  獨立寫作多關(guān)注教育和生活類。

3. Do you agree or disagree with the following  statement? it is better to finish a project completely then to do another job  than to do two or more projects at the same time.

4. Do you agree or disagree with the statement: It is  better to spend money on travelling and vacation than save money for the  future.